This week room 23
had to write a metaphor poem about snow lighting rain wind or snow.
As you can see I have done snow you had to write eight metaphor sentences. Then we had two make a background for our poem. We had two check if the spelling was correct. A metaphor is used when you compare two things together. I was proud of myself because I tried my best.
Hazel what an awesome metaphor poem! I am proud of you too.
ReplyDeletethank you dear mummy
DeleteHi Hazel I love how you described snow is albert Einstein's beard
ReplyDeletebut Why did you do Snow is white fluffy clouds because is that where the snow comes from. (But I did it to doesn't matter)
Hi Hazel I loved it when you described snow is a fluffy blanket.this reminds me of the winter. why did you chose snow. malby next time you should malby make the trees look a little more like a tree.
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ReplyDeleteexcellent job on making lots of metaphor sentences. Must be hard I did the same subject as you lighting! what are the photos on the bottom are they dog seals. maybe next time label your photos so we know what they are.
excellent job on your 8 metaphors. this reminds me of when i did mine yours is amazing how do you do you do that i was wondering if next time you could do a scary poem.
ReplyDeleteok i might
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