Thursday, 26 July 2018

🌜Moon🌚Ladder🌛
Chapter 1: A big Climb
                                                By Hazel G & Liam F
In a time when there were still dragons and unicorns, an inventor created a ladder that stretched all the way to the moon! One day two travelers named Hazel and Liam saw  what looked like a giant pole in the distance so, they ran towards it like it was a giant christmas present. After a few minutes they got to the ladder and liam exclaimed “let’s climb this ladder”  Liam went up first and Hazel followed.

Chapter 2 is coming soon
at

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 July 2018 at 14:25

    Hi hazel I really enjoyed your story Moon Ladder It was very creative and I loved it .
    Maybe you could add some show not tell but other than that it was great .If you want to check out my blog it's https://odstamsyne.blogspot.com just copy and paste it in the search bar and it should come up.🍉

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous20 August 2018 at 19:49

    Hi Hazel I like how you said that chapter 2 is coming soon, now I want to check on your blog everyday so I can read chapter 2. I wonder what it would be like to climb a ladder to the moon! Possibly next time you could try to make your chapter a bit longer.
    Great job!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)