cat owners
I think that people
should feed their cats
they should spadel neut
cats so you wont have
100 cats and people should make sure they have enough money to look after their cats.
people should spadel neut their cats so they don't have lots of babies.
I think that people should save up for their cats so they won't be starving and kill
birds.
people should be responsible cat owners.
My Reflection:
To use my writing plan to structure my writing
I felt proud because I think that my writing is
getting better and better every day and I am getting
better at my spelling and I love and I love it so much is my free writing a few weeks ago me and
shriya and Juno were writing a story called the magic portal to minecraft and it had 6 pages and
the story is about how to girls were looking for there favorite book but they look in the mirror and
they see a portal that gos to minecraft and and they see a little house and they go in the house and find a boy and they find another house and then their was a girl in the house and she took them to princess Juno and princess Juno gave them a gift and then she sent them home but they find the book with a spider on it... and then Shriya say ahhhhhhhhhhh.
Hi Hazel, I found your recount very interesting because you talked about the story that you wrote. I think that my writing is getting better too. perhaps next time you could make sure that you don't repeat words if they don't have to be repeated. URL to my blog: https://odshazelp.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteI like how you added pitchers into it and wrote a reflection and used different colors in your witing.
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ReplyDeleteHi Hazel i found the recount interesting too but you repeated somethings and somethings are misspelt I like how you wrote the recount in text if you don't want to / cant read the writing i think you could make the text more readable color like black.
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Hi Hazel!
ReplyDeleteI like this blog post because I agree with the points you made about what cat owners should do for their cats. I hope that you will post the story you mentioned in the reflection part of your blog post soon. I notice some spelling and grammar mistakes so next time maybe you could double check and read through before posting.
Bye!